Post by Jack of blades on Oct 22, 2009 17:17:15 GMT -5
(Hey guys, like Ikima I kinda created some of my own races that fill up a world and I'm gonna post it here. I'll put the Nerak race in general before my actual character which is a WIP. The character pic at the bottom is basically what they look like so you can use that to see a visual refrence)
Race name: Nerak
Average life expectancy: an average Nerak can live for up to one hundred years.
Sample names: Hanz, Dietrich, and Eva.
Languages: A Nerak's main language is basically German, although most are tought english as an extra language
Personality: a Nerak's personality is extremely sick to anyone else but them. They are mostly rude, incosiderate, and hatefull to anyone but their own kind, and they see this as perfectly normal. Despite this they don't look down on most races, although they do have a hate of Carrisions (The biggots). They also tend to like blood and most take on jobs as soldiers or surgeons to fufill this dark need they have to see others blood. Their is also an unhealthy amount of Nerak who smoke, although they seem to be immune to the negative effects and don't get addicted either.
Physical description: Nerak look extremely strange to people who have never scene one before. To most who see them they look like creepy teddy bears and is somewhat what they are Their fur color is always brown, with a light tan for their stomach fur. They have stitch marks all over their body, and this is from when they were born. Their are some Nerak who are born without this, and these people usualy tend to become people in a high ranks such as Generals or even Emperor's (Although they don't have much of an empire) and are usualy called Purans, do to their pure genetics. They all have claws on both their feet and hands, and most have black eye's, yellow where the white is on a normal eye is, and purple under the eye. Most Nerak are tall and slim as well.
Normal Attire: A Nerak wears normal clothes that you'd see on everyday people. Soldiers however usualy wear a clothing design simliar to those you'd see on WWII Germans, including the long black trenchcoat and black hats for officers and the green and light tan design for regular soldiers.
History: The Nerak are a strange race and so are their origins and alot is unclear unless they explain it, which they know all to well considering it's part of their religion. As the Nerak remember it all started with a girl that they only know the last name of, Anders. She was a rich mobian that had many lovely toys that she cherished everyday. Unfourtanitly her parents wouldn't let her have much contact with people outside of the castle she lived in so she was very lonely. Eventually she grew board of her toys and needed a person to talk to and she suddenly got a great idea.
She asked her parents to buy her alot of realistic looking teddybears for her to play with. Her parents agreed and bought her about one hundred of the bear you see above, except less bloody. The girl then started her plan off by using some magic she had learned about in her fathers private vault that contained powerful magic. She read aloud from the scroll and the teddy bears came alive, creating the first of the Nerak race.
Despite what they look and act like now, Nerak used to be a nice and kind race, mostly since their first leader was a eight year old girl. She knew since she had made the Nerak they were also able to reproduce now, although they took great care to do this when she wasn't there. She always treated the Nerak as a seperate race that deserved their own name and eventually she would call them the Nerak, although reasons for this are not known.
The girl and her new race of creatures played like this for years up until she was thirteen, when the "Great Incedent" as the Nerak would later call it, happened. During this time, a large force of Carrision's had come to take the castle and use it in defense against the Virosians who were going to attack soon. The girl and her parent's kindly refused and attempted to send them on their way, only to get violance from the Carrision troops. On a misfire one of the soldiers accidently fired, hitting the little girl in the head and pretty much instantly killing her.
The Nerak were stunned to see that their creator had died, and even worse, they were extremely upset about it. The Nerak attacked the Carrision troops with their bear hands, litteraly shredding the soldiers to pieces with their sharp claws. This is said to be the time were the Nerak began to love violance and hate the Carrisions. In the days that followed the Virosians did show up, but instead of violance they offered peace and revenge. They said that they would be honored to fight beside the Neraks to kill the Carrisions. The Nerak's aggread and quickly signed a peace treaty between the Nerak and the Virosians that still stands today and was signed by Vayard, the current emperor of Virosia, and Dietriech, who would later become the first of the Nerak Emperors.
Other then that the Neraks are a short lived race, having only been on the planet for 300 years, so they haven't really done much. Over the years the Nerak would turn into a small Empire that was at the bottom of the Virosian held continant. They still tend to gather around the castle their creator had died in, being that their entire religion is centered around a child that is sometimes reffered to as "The Mother". The castle is not only where the Emperor lives but is also a rather large church that hasn't been changed much from the way it had origenally looked.
(And now here's the character)
Name: Field Doctor/ambassador Edgar Vekar
Nicknames: Ed
Age: 24
Species: Nekar
Gender: Male
Martial status: Single
DOB: february 12, 1985
Birth place:
Residence:
Occupation: Field Doctor in the Nerak Royal Army and is also the unofficial ambassador for the Nerak race
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Known relatives: Commander Hans Vekar, Lady Vekar
Personality: Edgar is somewhat bold for a Nerak. He enjoys talking to other people besides his own race and because of this he's learned almost every language you could possibly think of. He also tends to scare most people since he looks like a crazy person who had just cut open a person
Physical appearance: Look above
Attire: When he's working as a doctor he wears a white apron, white hat, and white facemasks. (Shown above) When he's working as an ambassador he wears a long black trenchcoat, a black hat, black shirt, and black boots
History: To be announaced
Race name: Nerak
Average life expectancy: an average Nerak can live for up to one hundred years.
Sample names: Hanz, Dietrich, and Eva.
Languages: A Nerak's main language is basically German, although most are tought english as an extra language
Personality: a Nerak's personality is extremely sick to anyone else but them. They are mostly rude, incosiderate, and hatefull to anyone but their own kind, and they see this as perfectly normal. Despite this they don't look down on most races, although they do have a hate of Carrisions (The biggots). They also tend to like blood and most take on jobs as soldiers or surgeons to fufill this dark need they have to see others blood. Their is also an unhealthy amount of Nerak who smoke, although they seem to be immune to the negative effects and don't get addicted either.
Physical description: Nerak look extremely strange to people who have never scene one before. To most who see them they look like creepy teddy bears and is somewhat what they are Their fur color is always brown, with a light tan for their stomach fur. They have stitch marks all over their body, and this is from when they were born. Their are some Nerak who are born without this, and these people usualy tend to become people in a high ranks such as Generals or even Emperor's (Although they don't have much of an empire) and are usualy called Purans, do to their pure genetics. They all have claws on both their feet and hands, and most have black eye's, yellow where the white is on a normal eye is, and purple under the eye. Most Nerak are tall and slim as well.
Normal Attire: A Nerak wears normal clothes that you'd see on everyday people. Soldiers however usualy wear a clothing design simliar to those you'd see on WWII Germans, including the long black trenchcoat and black hats for officers and the green and light tan design for regular soldiers.
History: The Nerak are a strange race and so are their origins and alot is unclear unless they explain it, which they know all to well considering it's part of their religion. As the Nerak remember it all started with a girl that they only know the last name of, Anders. She was a rich mobian that had many lovely toys that she cherished everyday. Unfourtanitly her parents wouldn't let her have much contact with people outside of the castle she lived in so she was very lonely. Eventually she grew board of her toys and needed a person to talk to and she suddenly got a great idea.
She asked her parents to buy her alot of realistic looking teddybears for her to play with. Her parents agreed and bought her about one hundred of the bear you see above, except less bloody. The girl then started her plan off by using some magic she had learned about in her fathers private vault that contained powerful magic. She read aloud from the scroll and the teddy bears came alive, creating the first of the Nerak race.
Despite what they look and act like now, Nerak used to be a nice and kind race, mostly since their first leader was a eight year old girl. She knew since she had made the Nerak they were also able to reproduce now, although they took great care to do this when she wasn't there. She always treated the Nerak as a seperate race that deserved their own name and eventually she would call them the Nerak, although reasons for this are not known.
The girl and her new race of creatures played like this for years up until she was thirteen, when the "Great Incedent" as the Nerak would later call it, happened. During this time, a large force of Carrision's had come to take the castle and use it in defense against the Virosians who were going to attack soon. The girl and her parent's kindly refused and attempted to send them on their way, only to get violance from the Carrision troops. On a misfire one of the soldiers accidently fired, hitting the little girl in the head and pretty much instantly killing her.
The Nerak were stunned to see that their creator had died, and even worse, they were extremely upset about it. The Nerak attacked the Carrision troops with their bear hands, litteraly shredding the soldiers to pieces with their sharp claws. This is said to be the time were the Nerak began to love violance and hate the Carrisions. In the days that followed the Virosians did show up, but instead of violance they offered peace and revenge. They said that they would be honored to fight beside the Neraks to kill the Carrisions. The Nerak's aggread and quickly signed a peace treaty between the Nerak and the Virosians that still stands today and was signed by Vayard, the current emperor of Virosia, and Dietriech, who would later become the first of the Nerak Emperors.
Other then that the Neraks are a short lived race, having only been on the planet for 300 years, so they haven't really done much. Over the years the Nerak would turn into a small Empire that was at the bottom of the Virosian held continant. They still tend to gather around the castle their creator had died in, being that their entire religion is centered around a child that is sometimes reffered to as "The Mother". The castle is not only where the Emperor lives but is also a rather large church that hasn't been changed much from the way it had origenally looked.
(And now here's the character)
Name: Field Doctor/ambassador Edgar Vekar
Nicknames: Ed
Age: 24
Species: Nekar
Gender: Male
Martial status: Single
DOB: february 12, 1985
Birth place:
Residence:
Occupation: Field Doctor in the Nerak Royal Army and is also the unofficial ambassador for the Nerak race
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Known relatives: Commander Hans Vekar, Lady Vekar
Personality: Edgar is somewhat bold for a Nerak. He enjoys talking to other people besides his own race and because of this he's learned almost every language you could possibly think of. He also tends to scare most people since he looks like a crazy person who had just cut open a person
Physical appearance: Look above
Attire: When he's working as a doctor he wears a white apron, white hat, and white facemasks. (Shown above) When he's working as an ambassador he wears a long black trenchcoat, a black hat, black shirt, and black boots
History: To be announaced
